Prologue Wrap-Up: Character Breakdowns, Date Mysteries Solved, and Final Reflections
This is an analysis of the characters, the author's intentions and interpretations, solutions to the date scenes, and closing thoughts (recommended to read after Chapter 20, but feel free to skip).
It's an explanation of the characters, interpretations of the date scenes, and reflections to wrap up the prologue.
This is a preparatory section before the main story begins
Since it only contains explanations about the work, you can follow the story without reading it.
Feel free to jump straight to the next chapter (main story)!
Hello, this is author Piatre.
First off, even as a newbie writer, thanks to all your love, we've hit No. 1 on the free new works overall ranking and successfully gone premium. Let me express my gratitude once again.
I thought splitting it into two parts would drag on too much, so I wrapped it up in one.
It feels like my first child, so my affection made it longer.
There are three parts total: explanations of the characters, interpretations of the date scenes, and reflections on finishing the prologue.
I dared to write this to share my thoughts on the work with you.
As a beginner writer, everything feels cautious. I've tried various things with each chapter, but this one seems the hardest.
Let's get started.
1. First, explanations of the characters.
Currently, there are a total of 4 people under hypnosis.
Childhood friend Kim Eunji, former landlady Kim Ayoung, her daughter Lee Seoyeon, and junior Lee Jian.
Difference between Eunji and Seoyeon
First, childhood friend Eunji hasn't appeared since the app test, but she'll reappear later.
The biggest difference between Eunji and Seoyeon is that Eunji only spent one day together, while Seoyeon has already been with me for three days straight.
For Eunji, I erased the memories and suggestions from the day after hypnosis. For just one night together, keywords aren't that crucial. I can just lift the suggestions the next day anyway.
But I was quite drawn to the physical pleasure Seoyeon provided, so I took her out on a date the next day, and that's when problems arose.
The other three, excluding Seoyeon, have never gone from inside to outside together while hypnotized.
I moved with Seongtae, but it was just going between places. In reality, Seoyeon is the only one who went from inside to outside with suggestions active alongside Seongtae.
That's why various issues cropped up during the date. Afterward, Seongtae realizes the need for more precise commands.
Difference between Ayoung and Seoyeon
What's the difference between Ayoung and Seoyeon? It's their level of obedience.
Ayoung is at 100% obedience.
Have any readers noticed Seoyeon describing her master's face?
Do you care about the appearance of a god?
You'd feel gratitude, respect, warmth, tolerance, and grace from the blessings bestowed by the god, but their looks aren't that important.
That's why Ayoung keeps chiming in with meaningless affirmations like "How kind of you, how gentle" at the end of sentences, just praising away.
Even in all those conversations, they never once discuss what Seongtae looks like.
Why? Because to Ayoung, Seongtae feels like the savior who pulled her from hell. That's why her slave declaration sounded like a hymn of praise. Seongtae gets a cult vibe from Ayoung's slave oath.
The abyss Ayoung fell into is commonly called hell, right? Cults threaten hell if you don't believe, and their leaders are messiahs saving the world.
In reality, once hooked on a cult, people offer family, money, and even become sex slaves to the leader. So they praise the leader nonstop.
Cults swindle money without a hypnosis app, make wives offer husbands' money, go beyond offering their bodies to even dedicating their only daughter for the leader's sexual pleasure.
I wanted to portray Ayoung as someone fallen into a cult leader's grasp.
But Seoyeon? Not quite. She's just acting under hypnosis right now; if all suggestions were lifted, she'd probably report Seongtae immediately.
Yet the hypnosis on her took so well it's like a perfect puppet—spoiling her with cuteness too.
That's why Seongtae couldn't carelessly lift suggestions. He tested her this way and that.
Difference between Jian and Seoyeon
Why was Seongtae harsh with Seoyeon and Ayoung but gentle with Jian? There's a reason.
With Seoyeon, it was physical attraction; Jian symbolizes mental attraction.
Seoyeon has idol-level looks, body, and big breasts as highlights.
What about Jian? She's short and small-breasted, but she's a living human in the novel. Jian shares some memories with Seongtae.
She's an acquaintance from daily life.
Her reasons for liking him aren't just his dick—they're specific: face, height, memories, kindness, etc. So he felt some pity for hypnotizing her and gave her one day.
That's why the everyday conversation part is long—to show readers that Seongtae, Jian, and Seokhyeon go way back. Seokhyeon knows Seongtae's nickname "Anaconda" and why he quit soccer, so they're close friends.
Jian's constant "I'm a Korea University student too, you know?" is because she's actually pretty smart. Height is her complex, so she boasts her brains. Seongtae was drawn to that intelligence... the mental side.
So with Jian, he showers together for the first time, treats her gently, princess-carries her, and is kind. The moment he confirms it's Jian's throat at the end, any lingering morality in Seongtae vanishes.
But with Seoyeon?
People can be crueler to total strangers. Since Seoyeon and Ayoung were unknowns, he was harsher.
That's why he went straight to throat inauguration without mercy.
Still, Seongtae was drawn to Seoyeon's physical allure.
Hypnosis on Seoyeon
We all wear masks in life, hiding our hidden desires and urges. After getting the hypnosis app, Seongtae unleashes his desires on others without restraint. His unique fetishes—like thrusting into throats or making them drink semen and piss—are prime examples.
What about Seoyeon? Under Seongtae's suggestions, she pursues only pleasure, becoming honest with her desires. In short, she turns into a bitch in heat. Especially her exhibitionism flares up.
Check Chapter 10: three major suggestions.
First, once her hymen tears, any resistance or disgust toward men vanishes, and she falls in love with Seongtae.
Second, every time she's penetrated by a dick, it feels good, turning her into a pleasure-craving bitch who realizes she was born to obey this man.
Third, upon creampie, she becomes a faithful slave obeying Han Seongtae's every command.
In Chapter 11, he commands her not to scream or ask for help. Plenty more, but we'll skip.
What does a bitch in love want most? Pregnancy. So Seoyeon says she wants to get pregnant more than anything.
Females instinctively want to monopolize the male.
Mammals, with long pregnancies, constantly seek confirmation of their status from the male, right? Seoyeon calls Ayoung "mom" but keeps calling her a bitch or sticking out her tongue— that's Seoyeon's jealousy bubbling up, fearing mom will steal and hog Seongtae.
A male's instinct doesn't mind adding females under him, but can't tolerate his woman going to another man.
Why? Males hate uncertainty about whose seed is in her belly, so they never hand her over. If he sees her as his, he wants constant confirmation she's his.
That's why he marked her belly from the start. She's mine now.
Conversely, Ayoung notes her master didn't mark her. From Seongtae's view, she's already been seeded by another, so not his.
Thus, no mark like with Seoyeon. Later anal requests too, but he doesn't want to seed this bitch. Neglect.
So only favored Seoyeon gets taken on a Sunday date.
2. Moving to the date story.
First, Seoyeon's monologue starting with "Hello!" is actually Seongtae roughly checking suggestions on her before the date. He hypnotized her to ask if they took hold.
We readers know from the text, but Seongtae can't remember every word he said, so he asks her. Confirming her state and who her master is.
Ayoung-Seoyeon difference: Ayoung popped "100% obedience," but not Seoyeon. Some suggestion could break, letting her struggle again. But too perfect a puppet to waste—suggestions took so well, she's cute, eats semen-stained food deliciously, attitude flipped 180 degrees.
Seongtae feels satisfied with that.
2. Date story details.
Seongtae commands Ayoung for money vs. Seoyeon commands Ayoung to hand money to Seongtae.
Two interpretations possible.
"My master is still a student without money, so I commanded mom to withdraw from the bank account directly —> and gave Master 5 million won."
"Master has no money —> commanded mom —> (Ayoung) withdraws 5 million from bank —> gives to Master."
Maybe Seoyeon begged mom for her first-ever date cash to follow master.
From Seoyeon's view, both are equal slaves now. No.1 vs. No.2 aside, "mom" is just a title—same rank slaves.
Could Ayoung refuse if Seoyeon whined about her first life date with master?
Seongtae could've squeezed 5 million. Seoyeon said adult toys and restaurant were "mom's money," but maybe Seongtae paid private?
He told sommelier it was coin trading profits—maybe Seoyeon assumed mom's money? No tags on cash.
Whose money was it?
Seongtae teases Seoyeon on subway vs. Seoyeon actually molested on subway.
Seoyeon sees subway touch as master's. Why? She's never held Seongtae's hand properly—barely overlaid yesterday. No caresses before, just pounding. So she surrendered to pleasure, not knowing if groper or master.
Even if groper, no male resistance left, and can't scream/ask help per command.
Seongtae is cautious, avoiding eyes. Commands no talking about him to others. Detailed guy.
Sunday packed subway—that touch from groper? Seongtae? Or after alighting, she praises master's touch, so Seongtae overlays memory to avoid hurt feelings?
Up to reader judgment.
Adult store first because Seoyeon begged vs. Seongtae took her there first.
Chapter 12: "I'm a bitch but no tail, dissatisfied..." Under suggestion, saw Ayoung acting bitchy woofing, eating semen floor food—solidifies she's bitch.
But no tail symbol. So begs Seongtae.
Seongtae picks safe pasta on Jian date. Would he suggest adult store? Seoyeon? Him?
Who attached dog tail?
Seongtae says "Anal kinda dirty?"—never done anal till recent Ayoung first.
Would such guy pick tail first?
Seongtae scatterbrained but calculated. App test: secluded spot, deeper than waiter seat. Women's restroom with Jian: no fuss. Remembers keywords.
Would such guy command tail in CCTV-crowded store? Or Seoyeon projecting her desire as master's?
Handed Seoyeon to shop owner vs. Told lecherous-eyed owner to grope her breasts.
Lewd gaze subjective.
Did Seongtae hand her over? Or negotiating discount for multiple items incl. Ayoung's, thrifty?
Maybe Seoyeon felt owner's lewd stare, offered breasts herself?
Seongtae marked her as his—need to hand over? Against male instinct?
Chapters 12/15: Seoyeon's statements shift.
"Went bathroom, inserted 2 rotors gifted by master."
vs.
"Master yelled once, talked education, commanded 2 rotors."
Say Person A believes "Sex crime convictions on woman's tears/testimony alone unfair." I won't state opinion.
Person A hears Seoyeon: "Seongtae, bastard! Discount by pimping her breasts?!"
That'd be conviction on testimony alone.
But Seoyeon's testimony wavers.
Placed Ch15 reverse-chronologically. 3 chaps apart, hard to recall changes.
Memory's biggest trait: volatility.
Not stored in hippocampus, doesn't become long-term—changes quick. Worse post-drinking.
Human memory alters easily.
Intentional plot. Borrowed Christopher Nolan's Memento time structure for novel. No B&W/color diff, so alternated Seongtae POV.
Same-day car chat post-date would've been bland duplicates; twisted plot for freshness.
Made more ambiguous to feel hypnotized mental patient's unreliability.
Ch15 Seoyeon: unlike Ch12, "time passed," "drunk," "you commanded," "don't remember well."
Familiar lines? What innocents say.
One-night stand: "Drunk yesterday, not my intent. Don't remember."
Maybe Seongtae adjusted suggestions amid issues, distorting/erasing memories.
Strictly, Seoyeon victim, Seongtae perpetrator.
Breaking/entering + rape. Yet "'My woman' to others?"—gaslighting?
I explained shaky bridge/Stockholm syndrome—falling for kidnapper.
If you interpreted handover, maybe you have Stockholm for protag Seongtae.
Objectively, he's the bad guy. Seoyeon wasn't his girl.
What do you see in Seongtae?
Pervert obsessed with throats suspiciously. But checks repeatedly from Eunji—not showy.
Street: Jian kneels cleaning, startles, takes to bathroom—Seongtae. If he activated rotor... no need surprise? Told her his bathroom clean too.
Deeper seat than waiter, covered skirt stairs, taught table manners.
Heat bitch instinctual: wants pounding everywhere, pisses street.
Need activate rotor street for eyes? Seongtae?
Maybe stairs cover saw dildo plugged, forgot extract—restaurant she mentions, bathroom return, he wipes chair fluids?
Seoyeon inserted 2 rotors bathroom (Ch12) vs. Master commanded 2 rotors (Ch15).
Which true?
Did Seongtae order rotor + dildo? Her claim. Projecting her wants as master's to justify self?
In-story Ayoung thinks: "Hate thinking now. Leave to master."
Reward for obey, abandon thought—defy means hell. Everyday too: "Expert right, what do I know?" "You know better than scientist?" Entrust thinking.
Ayoung: idol worship.
Ch15: Tried dildo walk, too good. Ch12: Told insert dildo come. Which?
Why Ch15 convos messy/disoriented
Seoyeon-Ayoung chat chaotic/messy to show minds broken.
Would heat bitch think normally? Seoyeon animal-in-heat: no brain filter, spews vulgarities.
No window scenery—dense vulgar dialogue. Pussy, rotor, dildo, dick, semen, bitch, piss, meat toilet—deliberately crude/stimulating words.
100% sex drive: hold masturbation car ride? Crave constant fuck/fucked? Can't rational talk.
Vs. Seongtae POV: detailed home desc, locations, music, plans, command worries, quantum mechanics, app, money schemes, keywords—mind full.
Seongtae notices lilac scent on Seoyeon; she only recalls dick/pussy basics.
Even writing "lavender scent" here tricks readers—memory unreliable.
Past eps: Eunji lavender; Seongtae first smelled Seoyeon's woman scent, told shower—then milky shampoo.
Setting error? Nah, Seongtae recently met Seoyeon, confused with Eunji's. No need remember meat toilet scent. Point: memory imperfect.
Even notices blazer at restaurant, but surely odd baggy pants—forgot. Eyes only on dick.
Essentially dick-obeying bitch.
Caveat: not male-female diff, but hypnotizer vs. hypnotized POV gap huge.
Arranged so readers feel stark contrast. Lectures complex/long convos for that.
Seongtae overlooked commands absolute. Told Ayoung masturbate—she did all day.
Imagine: Seongtae cafe, doesn't know Eunji where. Assumed commanded obey all my orders.
Calls: "Come cafe now."
She's school bathroom, mid-pee wipe.
Call: "Come now"—vague absolute command.
Mid-wipe "come cafe now"—comes panty-less sure. No how: walk/run/drive?
Seongtae realized date with Seoyeon.
"Pleasure-craving bitch"—pees dog-like when wants, can't hold urges, 100% exhibitionism out. Ayoung masturbated all day.
So needs self-censor words.
Critiquing hypnosis stories' reckless commands. Puppets act with ego weird.
If I wrote Seongtae POV: constantly recall suggestions, add new to Seoyeon—time up.
School: Kvbeer keyword repeat, distinguishes commands/words. Tedious for readers to emphasize cautious—even taps bridges.
Experienced all-words-commands chaos. May carry notebook record commands.
More people, harder remember keywords.
Home? Desires 100% free.
Seongtae's true nature awakens. Ends using Jian throat onahole—no more conscience. Can be crueler.
Home: any commands, lift all home suggestions—no biggie.
So needs burden-free command zone.
Most hypnosis stories/manga: indiscriminate. Absolute ruler.
But live sex machines?
Daily eps: classroom, women's restroom, cafe—app there, why hold back? Felt stuffy?
If all hypnotizable: send Seokhyeon home easy, "no one minds cafe sex" hypnotize, fuck Jian.
Public toilet meat toilet fine.
Class hypnotize prof public masturbate students—sex ed over quantum.
But Seongtae limited ~14, must cautious.
If only 10 hypnotizable, who choose?
Not all female slaves probably.
Harder than thought. Wanted that dilemma in work.
Normal world, 10 hypnosis: who you'd pick? Curious.
First brainwashing Ayoung: realizes fetish—pissing.
Semen functional impregnate; piss pure waste.
Excretion.
Feeding waste = absolute loyalty/obedience, huge dominance/satisfaction.
Ayoung bathroom smoke pee: first urge spray/feed someone. Told Seoyeon meat toilet—she naturally kissed, throat to dick.
Drunk, warm throat wrap + wine pee urge—grab head, merciless thrust cum.
Drunk: usual desires burst, reckless suggestions.
Result: Seoyeon semen/piss addict bitch. Licks nonstop. Condom semen, master throat-piss addicted.
Drunk commands' result. Hypnotizer needs clear mind.
Regretted mistake initially, but satisfaction/dominance thrill good—will make more meat toilets.
But story never has them eat shit. Personally hate.
In-story, Ayoung's husband lost wife overseas to Seongtae. Pitiful. But reality: seduced clueless 20yo virgin Ayoung, no basic condom. Blocked bright actress path with premarital pregnancy, married—sex dwindled? Company really that many trips? Unknown.
Ayoung natural enema, anal beg, whipping, cig burn, insults—masochist awakening? Or husband influence? Maybe gaslit. Guilt remittances? Said 2wks return, maybe sudden Netherlands trip.
Reality-fiction boundary blurs. Feels Han Seongtae plotting somewhere—immersive. Motif from Haruki Murakami's 1Q84.
"Activated rotor, already climaxed. When?!" Answer exists.
Ch15 first "jiing"—rotor on; sentences insert "haa haa"—moans, not sighs. Tears streaming—came.
But not crucial. Complex/messy sentences convey disordered mind.
Asked if caught all tricks/commands.
Found one but scared wrong, no comment? Or no answers wanted?
Korea education hypnosis? Our culture.
Suneung till hunt answers. Lit: accept as-is fine, varied interpretations.
No need all correct. Lit ok own take, but seek "right" answer.
Show tiny suggestions huge impact. Seongtae's casual ones butterfly effect.
Seongtae smokes publicly? Not bravado—doesn't see Seoyeon/Ayoung equals. Strong dominance symbol. None dare ask no smoke.
Indeed, never with Jian. Final throat cum on Jian—carves humanity chunk, smokes room.
3. Closing the Prologue
To readers,
Thank you for the immense love to this debut serial newbie.
If my virgin work leaves decent novel impression in your memories, it'd be an honor.
Thanks to you, No.1 free new ranking enabled premium. Truly grateful.
"Write what I want!" Started trance-like, sudden overwhelming love—chugging tonics, joyfully writing.
Neighbor Japan's giant Haruki Murakami writes daily 20 sheets 200-char manuscript paper—4000 chars.
Not comparable speck, but grinding bit by bit, awed by his routine. My ambiguous style/POV shifts influenced too.
Main job + weekly serial tough. But fun writing + many readers enabled it.
Ch20 recovered most ep breadcrumbs. If detail-oriented reader got chills, satisfied.
Essentially smut, but twisted complex structure.
One: Bath—Seoyeon wipes dick (physical pleasure) with breasts, Ayoung anal (submission/domination crave), Jian head wash (mental pull).
Overall tight composition.
Reread slowly, see Ch19/20: "Ah, that's why said that. Consequence of that act."
Personally moving(?): Seoyeon Ch10 mom's-name condom insert, now her-name bare. Teaching Jian oaths too.
Homages: Piss fruity from Parallel Paradise—women's fluids flavor by diet. Real piss odd? Kidney issue, see doc.
Blabbing too long.
Musician: No music composing fearing influence. Reading joy too, but avoid books lest influence—print addict suffers.
Here ends long/short prologue. Main story starts now.
Will strive as earnest, lacking writer ahead.
Thank you.
Piatre