America Is About to Lose Its Mind
The first time I got back to the bench after putting a touchdown on the board in the first quarter, Coach grabbed my arm and asked:
“What in the world was that?”
Mama said, come home.
It had been born out of a completely accidental conversation.
Last night, to be exact.
Amon-Ra and I were talking about our childhoods when the subject came up — whose mom was scarier. The conclusion: neither of us could claim the win.
And then we got to this.
“You know how we never make it home on time for dinner?”
“Ah, damn. You can't even imagine what that was like.”
“So we just hauled ass running.”
“Kukuku. Ohhh?”
The moment I told Amon-Ra it'd be hilarious to use 'Mama said, come home' as an audible call, he agreed instantly and said he hoped a day would come when we'd actually get to run it.
And that was that.
Neither of us had any idea we'd actually get to use it.
Much less the very next day.
Anyway.
We'd gone up 7-3 in the first quarter, but after that, the East's defensive edges woke up and started hunting, and putting points on the board became a real grind for us.
We managed a single field goal in the third quarter, when JT Daniels took the snaps — but the East answered with a field goal of their own, and the gap held steady at three points.
And just now—
“Yeah!”
The East added another field goal.
16-10.
A six-point lead.
But it was still a one-possession game.
One good drive and we'd take the lead.
“Moi.”
“Yes sir.”
“Go raise hell.”
“Oorah.”
03 07 03 03 – 16 EAST
07 00 03 00 – 10 WEST
Before stepping onto the field, I glanced up at the jumbotron.
The East had done real work on their last possession.
To be precise, Trevor had done real work.
One of the most important things in football is the ability to manage the clock.
Once the play clock starts moving, the game clock doesn't stop for anything outside a handful of situations:
A change of possession after a score.
An out of bounds.
A penalty.
A timeout.
An injury stoppage, and so on.
Outside of those reasons, the clock keeps running between every down — which is why a leading team is often praised for a 'successful drive' simply for draining time.
On their last possession, Trevor had chewed up 62 total yards across three drives and eleven offensive plays, using 5 minutes and 59 seconds of game time with ruthless efficiency — including the final 1:42 of the third quarter.
Now it was my turn.
How should I spend the clock?
Fast?
Or slow?
Either way, if we scored on this drive, the East would most likely get at least one more crack at it. If I assumed they'd need somewhere between two and a half and four and a half minutes for that, then I had to score within 160 seconds at the outside.
Our drive would start at our own 25.
75 yards to go.
By no means easy.
But not impossible, either.
And more than anything—
This time, I planned to do things a little differently.
“Rea-dy! Set, hut!”
I took the snap,
dropped back, and set my feet.
After that first slip-up, the East's defensive edges had started playing for real, and through the second and third quarters they'd pressured the quarterback effectively.
Even now they were desperate to beat our offensive tackles and crash toward me — but that, in turn, had opened a lane between the defensive tackles. A space to run.
Seeing it, I didn't hesitate.
5 yards.
10 yards.
And then—
Shoop.
I slid down smoothly, handed the ball to the official, and waved the boys over to huddle up right away.
“One more time.”
“You're running it again?”
“Right now that's the fastest way to eat yards.”
“If you say so.”
“Okay. Let's go.”
Clap!
While the East was lining up that field goal earlier, I'd gone to Coach myself and told him I'd be carrying the ball.
The East's defensive line trusted their elite edges so completely that the tackles were playing loose and the linebackers were dropping deep — a defense built on the assumption that shutting down the medium and long pass would neutralize our offense entirely.
That kind of scheme was only possible because our running back was, frankly, mediocre.
And the proof: Harold Joiner, across more than fifteen carries,
had managed barely twenty-some yards.
Six of those carries had even lost yardage.
Which was exactly why
I'd decided to run it myself.
At the high school and college level, a scrambling quarterback is nothing unusual anyway, and back at Kahuku my yards-per-carry numbers were actually better than Enoch's.
“Rea-dy! Set, hut!!”
Tak.
Same as before.
Take the snap, retreat a step,
and first, scan the receivers.
If the East's back end had blown an assignment, throwing would eat up big yards in a hurry.
But just like last play, their backs were airtight over the top — so I cut into the lighter boxes at the line and took off again.
7 yards.
Nineteen total yards on two carries,
and before we knew it, we'd crossed into midfield.
Three straight running plays would probably keep working.
But I wanted to break the rhythm here.
“Let's run the option off a jet sweep.”
“Ohh—?”
“Before the jet sweep, I'm calling a turbo. The second I do, I'm handing it to you and you take off left. Got it?”
“Copy that.”
“Good. Let's go.”
Clap!
This time, the linebacker was unmistakably sitting up top.
The instant I broke through, he'd be there to wrap me up.
So I sent T.J. Pledger — who'd joined the offensive side as an APB, an all-purpose back — off to the right.
“T.J No. 03! T.J No. 03!!”
That call meant sending T.J. to the 3 hole —
through the gap between our right guard and tackle.
Make it look like we were ripping that hole wide open,
and I'd be the one running into it.
This time, I was the decoy.
I nudged my feet and sent Amon-Ra sweeping across in motion,
and in the same beat, called it fast.
“Turbo, set, hut!!”
The snap came out quick.
I flipped the ball to Amon-Ra as he crossed in front of me,
then, like I'd handed off nothing at all,
cradling an empty belly with both hands,
I sprinted out beside T.J.
A moment later, the tackle arrived,
and I went down into the field in a bloom of pain.
When 140-kilogram brutes who run 40 yards in low five seconds hit you, even with no velocity behind it, the impact lands like a hammer.
That's why we have no choice but to be tough.
You wrap your muscles in armor,
or you don't survive hits like these.
The moment I hit the turf, a short roar went up from the stands, and from somewhere downfield came the sound of something hitting something big.
Amon-Ra had eaten a serious chunk of yards.
By the time we picked up our third drive and moved 28 yards, the clock had burned just 1:19.
“This time I'm going after the corner.”
“Which side?”
“Brian first.”
“Damn. Not me again?”
“You just had yours. Brian? Hitch.”
“Got it.”
“Nothing for the rest of you. Just keep me clean.”
“Let's Go!”
In this fourth quarter, the coaching staffs had zero involvement.
Both teams on equal footing,
and the quarterbacks calling everything themselves.
Granted, if your mind buckled you could beg the sideline for help — but if you needed that in a glorified all-star game, you had no business being here in the first place.
The call I'd just given.
No — calling it a play would be generous.
All I'd done was tell one target to run
a specific route.
A hitch.
Brian Hightower would sprint down the right side and then come back to face me, and I had to match him with a pass that was fast and precise.
Everyone else just had to keep me upright.
“Rea-dy! Set, hut!!”
Tak.
At the 47.
I wanted at least 15 yards from this play.
I dropped back, confirmed the pocket ahead was holding,
and looked right, ignoring the noise behind me.
He was running the route to the letter.
And then—
Pass.
I waved to the bench and we made our substitutions.
Five linemen.
Four wide receivers.
One fullback.
No tight end on the field.
I was going straight for the throat.
“My call starts from the left.”
“What's the order?”
“Amon, Cam'Ron, Brian, Waffle.”
“Copy that.”
“We're hitting the end zone in one shot. Amon? Be ready.”
“That's right— touchdown number two.”
“Drop it, and you're done. Nothing for you ever again.”
Clap!
I stepped under center
and barked the promised call.
“45!! 62!!”
Those four digits were the route tree for the receivers, starting from the leftmost — and once I'd confirmed everyone was looking forward, I called the play.
“Rea-dy!! Set, hut!!”
While Amon-Ra, absolutely electric, sprinted off to celebrate, I shared the moment with the O-line.
“You boys held it down for real.”
“Damn right we did.”
“JT can rot, but you five are safe forever.”
“Love you, you beautiful bastards.”
“Love you too.”
Across every down of that drive, I hadn't taken a single tackle — every last bit of it a gift from an O-line that kept me spotless.
The tackles, especially, were outstanding.
They'd struggled the whole game against Xavier Thomas and Micah Parsons, arguably the two best defensive edges in the country, but when the fourth quarter came, they locked in and built us a pristine pocket.
After trading joys with the linemen, I hustled to the bench
and settled in beside Coach.
“Well done. Damn impressive, kid.”
“Thank you, sir.”
Amon-Ra — who had punted the touchdown ball clear into the stands — came jogging back, and I hit him with the handshake we'd drilled the entire week of practice.
Two touchdowns to his name.
The kid was flying.
And on the ensuing extra point, Charles Campbell drilled the kick, and just like that, we'd stolen the lead — 17-16.
5:35 left.
The game was still anybody's.
03 07 03 03 – 16 EAST
07 00 03 07 – 17 WEST
The Alamodome today was crawling with NCAA personnel, naturally.
Under normal circumstances, they wouldn't have bothered sending recruiters here at all — but for the only sophomore on the field today, the nation's elite recruiting specialists had packed the sidelines near the field, notebooks in hand.
And right now, those recruiters were watching one particular phenomenon with barely concealed delight on their faces.
Clemson — visibly, unmistakably rattled.
And Georgia — grinning about it.
For three whole years, those two schools had waged a ferocious war over landing Trevor Lawrence, the best quarterback the state of Georgia had ever produced.
Georgia in particular had been zealous to the point of inviting Lawrence to camp for free three years running, touring him across campus, promising scholarships — everything in their power.
But at the final hour, Clemson had stolen Trevor Lawrence's heart, and Georgia could only watch it happen like a dog staring up at the roof after chasing off a chicken.
And yet today.
On a nationally televised U.S. Army All-American Bowl, Trevor Lawrence was taking a modest hit to his dignity.
True, once the fourth quarter arrived he'd been firing quick, accurate short passes — but he'd produced nothing beyond the yardage he gained.
And now.
Trevor Lawrence's last chance had arrived.
Third & Goal.
The East sat inside touchdown range, and a successful scoring strike would wipe away every disappointing play from earlier in one stroke.
“Rea-dy!! Set!!”
The snap arrived to Trevor Lawrence,
and the lines collided.
Everyone could feel this play deciding the game, so the defensive pressure was fiercer than it had been all day.
A corner of the East's O-line caved in,
and the moment Trevor saw it, the chase was on.
Ultimately, Trevor Lawrence chose to scramble —
bailing from the pocket under his own power.
And in the middle of his run,
one player caught Trevor Lawrence's eye.
So he let it fly,
and the ball tore downfield, hard and true.
The velocity was so absurd for a throw made on the run toward the left by a right-handed quarterback that the NCAA recruiters briefly marveled—
and then Brendan Radley-Hiles, the man who'd picked off Lawrence's ball in the first quarter, cut under it and stole it out of the air a second time.
Radley-Hiles ripped the pass away, rolled once with theatrical flourish, spiked the ball onto the field, and the charging West defenders swallowed up their No. 01 cornerback.
The decisive defensive stand.
Meanwhile, Trevor Lawrence—
“Fuck.”
His third interception of the day alone. He bowed his head under the weight of it all.
And now, the recruiters' eyes turned back toward Clemson.
Except the man who was supposed to be there was nowhere to be found.
A Vanderbilt staffer nearby mentioned that the moment the interception hit, one of their recruiting reps had quietly slipped out of his seat.
“Kukukukuku.”
“He bailed? For real?”
“Ah— hell. This is fun.”
Of course, one all-star game
isn't enough to judge Trevor Lawrence.
For the past three years he'd been the finest high school quarterback in America, and nobody doubted he'd dominate at the college level just as easily.
But the peculiar stakes of this particular U.S. Army All-American Bowl —
namely, the head-to-head with Dwayne Moi Stone —
magnified every one of Trevor Lawrence's errors, and in the same stroke made Moi's line of 2 touchdown passes and 0 interceptions shine all the brighter.
Today.
No—
the moment this game ended,
America was going to lose its mind.
Not just because a sophomore from Kahuku had fought well against the nation's premier high school quarterback —
but because he'd flat-out taught him a lesson.
On the next possession too, Dwayne Moi Stone managed the clock with surgical cunning, and the East burned timeouts in a desperate scramble to claw back the ball — but all too soon, only 17 seconds remained.
The snap arrived, and Moi dropped straight to one knee.
The 25-second huddle that followed
ran longer than what was left on the play clock, and by mutual agreement, both teams accepted the result and let the game die.
03 07 03 03 – 16 EAST
07 00 03 07 – 17 WEST
● PETE DAWKINS GAME MVP
QB — Dwayne Moi Stone
: 2 Touchdown Passes